I don’t know why it hadn’t hit me before this year; many of our students do not know how to email. I shouldn’t be surprised. After all, how many one line emails with little capitalization, no greeting or ending, and usually little specificity must one sit through before they get the message. And yet, it took me 8 years to realize that most students use email as a way to text and that teachers everywhere must be shaking their heads just like we have.
So this year, on the day back after spring break, we took 20 minutes to learn how to email better. It was so simple; students logged into their own email accounts and pulled up sent emails to teachers. A few were willing to share and I then shared a few myself that I had received. Some students laughed, others winced, but right away they started to see how their message could be read. How their intent could be misread and how in their endeavor to be efficient had forgotten what it meant to communicate well.
We then discussed how email is not like a text message, that while they may not use email much now except to communicate with their teachers, they really need to know how to write one anyway. That there is no excuse for being rushed or impolite when we speak to others and that email a conversation, albeit an electronic one.
We then spoke of the 6 steps to write an email:
- Specific subject matter to alert the purpose
- A greeting where the recipients name is correctly spelled.
- A nicety to begin the body of the email; how are you can go a long way to start a pleasant conversation.
- Specificity in their request. Not just “I need help,” but instead “I need help with…” and also including when they are available and would like to meet.
- A wrap up sentence thanking for help or time.
- An ending with their own name attached.
Students were then asked to email a teacher following the guidelines either asking for help, checking in on an assignment or simply reaching out. While this is not written anywhere in my standards, I feel that it was time well-spent. We may not have changed the world today, but as one student wrote today (in his email to me).
“Hi how are you doing, this email assessment is in my opinion is pretty cool. I think this will help with how I write my emails. I used to always do text message like emails with one sentence. Now I think with this new email format you showed us it will help me do better at writing emails to teachers or anyone.
Sometimes it is, truly, the little things…
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