Author: Pernille Ripp
Student Feedback on Writing
As we went around the circle one thing was made abundantly clear; writing was not a favorite subject. Writing! These students who have blogged more than 700 posts, blown me away with their superhero creations, and handed out heartfelt thank you letters to all of their teachers, they hated writing. In the past, I would have shrugged and not thought further of it, “Oh well, I tried…” But this year I asked them to tell me why and how I could fix it. So here are some of the ideas my 5th graders gave me:
- Let one of the daily journal prompts be a complete free write (easy!)
- We use the 6 traits curriculum so every week focus on one specific skills also in their journals. They can write about whatever they want but what we are looking to improve is that one skill.
- Give them more time to delve deeper into their stories.
- Have a culminating writing project (which we did this year) but make it free choice.
- Once a week do a pop definition hunt of a word where students are not allowed to use computers.
As I look at this list I see two things; free choice and how easy all of this would be to implement. So once again I remind myself to give the students time to speak, to add their voice to the curriculum, and then to actually follow through. I am already excited to add some of this to my writing next year.
My Kids Say Goodbye
- I like it a lot because you are not strict but don’t let kids fool around like my bus driver.
- I sometimes have been thinking I did bad but you made me feel much better.
- My family and I will miss you…I babysit.
- The most interesting part of my blogging experience was that people on the other side of the Earth ask questions that people in America think everyone must know the answer [to].
- Thank you for not trying to bore us in class…
- Thank you for criticizing me but not being mean about it.
- You have inspired me to want to become a teacher.
- You cared about the class and what we wanted…
- Thank you for helping and believing in me…
- I will miss you the most
And so that’s why I teach…
May your final days with your students be filled with stories and laughter, and perhaps a tear shed in private or public.
Does Absence Make the Student Grow Dumber? Or Is That Only For Certain Students?
So fast forward to this year and conversations we have about the importance of students being here or else…I can’t help but wonder if this applies to all students, I mean, let’s face it, there are students that cruise through school no matter how many challenges we throw their way. And on the flip side there are also students who hit every bump in the road even when they are here. So is being present in school enough to spell success? Or is it just one more factor that can lead down a certain path? I think I know the answer here, that it is just one factor that can lead to success, but then what is behind our thinking and our obsession with students coming to school? Why do we get so stuck on attendance with some students but not with others?
To You It May Be Just Politics, But To Me It Is Personal
And yet, if you ask the Governor of Wisconsin and many of his supporters, I had no glorious or noble intentions when I chose my profession. It is much more simple than that; I became a teacher to catch a free ride. To hustle the public into paying for my mediocrity with unlimited job protection so I can do as little as possible while collecting a big fat paycheck. I have become the reason for the recession we are in. I have become the reason for the dumbing down of American society. I have become the reason for the deficit, the lack of pay raises and the general bad state of the state of Wisconsin.
So these days I turn off the radio when the ads come on. I turn off the TV when the governor proclaims that his reforms are working, that taxpayers support him, that he is moving us forward. Forward doesn’t involve taking the voice away from the people of the state, even if they are public workers. Forward doesn’t involve cutting programs for the poorest people of the state. Forward doesn’t include dividing an entire state because you cannot reach across the aisle. Increasing class sizes and not being able to hire enough teachers is moving forward? Cutting my salary, which already is laughable, and giving me no chance for a raise, because there isn’t money for it, moving forward? I can’t even bargain for one, like they can in the private sector because that has been taken away too.
Yes, I believe in being held accountable, yes, I believe in paying my fair share, but I don’t believe that slashing the education budget is forward. I don’t believe in the governor when he says that Wisconsin is on the right path. I don’t believe that Wisconsin will become a better state because of what the politicians have done and that to me is just sad. Those who lead us should be role models, much like the teachers that are bashed every single day. So this isn’t just about politics, this is my life every day. The decisions made in our capitol affect every single thing I do in the classroom, yet where is the accountability for those who make the decisions? I hope someone can give me an answer.
Have You Asked For Parent Feedback – You Should, Even If It Hurts…
So why the trepidation? Well, even though most parents don’t take issue with how I teach, or we iron things out along the way, sending someone an anonymous survey to fill out makes anyone nervous. Particularly when those someones are people who have seen the direct result of your teaching on their child for a whole year. Particularly when those someones speak to other someones who may just have a child going into 5th grade. Particularly when those someones really have a right to tell you exactly how they feel because their kid is involved, which means they are involved.
And yet it took me 2 years to get to that point. It took me that long to want to hear what parents truly had to say. It took me 2 years to have enough confidence to be able to really listen without getting offended, without taking it like a personal attack. Without feeling they were automatically in the wrong if they didn’t love everything I had done.
So now it is with gratitude, and of course still trepidation that I read the answers they provide. I know I do school differently than most of them are used to. I know my philosophy sometimes stands in a stark contrast to those of my amazing team members. I know this 5th grade experience may be vastly different than that of 6th grade. So I ask the tough questions and then hold my breath. I ask how I can improve, what I should focus on next year, whether I did a good enough job, because I truly do want to hear the answers. I truly do want the truth so that I can grow. There are always answers that go straight to my heart, those that make me reflect and rething, refine and reconsider. And I am thankful for that.
Asking for feedback is never easy. Listening to the feedback is even harder, and yet, I don’t look back. I urge others to do the same; ask the questions and then really really listen to those answers. Don’t ask because you feel you have to, ask because you want to grow. Even if it hurts and stings. Even if it is not what you had hoped to hear. We are not perfect, or at least I am not. I still have a lot of growing to do.
PS: My parent survey changed a lot this year thanks to help from Kaitlyn Gentry who was kind enough to share her end of year survey with me.